This is a fascinating read! I don't know if you'll ever continue, but I would like you to know that I think it's great so far and has a lot of potential! Good job!
I just wanted to tell you i read your story Bargaining Chips on the Protective Chakotay Club archive and was just in awe. It has such a unique plot and you've written the characters so well. I love how the story is unfolding and Amok, Pacal and Corin are just adorable. I don't know how long its been since you've updated this story, but i would love to see it continued. It's too good of a story to be left unfinished. Anyways, if you ever decide to finish it i would love to read it.
Thanks for sharing;-)
Are you going to complete this story? It would make me very happy if you did!! :D