Name: Shebebad (Anonymous) · Date: 02/04/04 - 02:49 pm · Chapter: none
By the publish dates this story looks like it was written first which surprises me. I would have thought Paris POV would have been easier... Neither here, nor over there you have created another _great_ story. I love your use of similes: "Earth sky after a thunderstorm." Lovely, but weird, because it started to rain just as I finished reading. Why _weird_? Because, this is _Vegas_ and rain is fairly rare. I guess the _Spirits_ approve. Brava!

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