I liked that you showed how a J/P relationship could have played out through the whole series. In the chapter that had spoilers for "Night", I would have liked to have had more interaction between Tom and Kathryn such as Tom trying to talk to her about what was bothering her. Most of the chapters were written from Janeway's POV but I would have like more detail in some of them, more like Caged I guess. I still enjoyed what you wrote and especially the ending. Thanks for writing!
Reviews For Beautiful Disaster
Name: Juddysbuddy (Signed) · Date: 07/01/10 - 11:41 pm · Chapter: Chapter 23: He's Beautiful