Hey are you planning on updating this? I keep checking back to see what happens. currently it seems to me likely that Harry might confront Chakotay and then all hell will break loose.
Yes, I am in the process of writing the next scenes but have a bit of RSI so typing very slowly. Thanks for your encouragement! Will probably post by end of May.
This is really interesting how you write the same thing from 3 different points of view. It's amazing how differently they all perceive the same thing, especially Chakotay and Tom. If Chakotay hadn't been drinking when he first approached Tom, maybe he would have been more clear about what he wanted, but he didn't do much better in round 2 when he was totally sober. I'm looking forward to what happens next. Thanks for writing!
Thanks for your review! To be fair to Chakotay, he did try but Tom wasn't listening closely enough. In the next round it will all come out though...
Wow, this is really good stuff. Poor Tom! I hope that someone realises what's going on and helps the guy out.
Oh wow, this was so sad! I felt so bad for Tom I actually cried. The story was really well written. I hope that eventually it will work out well for Tom. I hate sad endings! Thanks for writing.
Oh yeah, there's more - I'm about halfway through the next set of scenes. I hope to post them next week.
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