Name: Astroskylark (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 - 07:45 pm · Chapter: pieces lost, pieces found

The story has no clear logical ending. Furthermore, the events depicted in the story are illogical in regard to the socail standing of crew members in the series.



Name: PernDragonrider (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 - 04:55 pm · Chapter: CHP1
I am seriously looking forward to seeing the end of this tale. Very well done that it is compelling reading that keeps you wanting to see what comes next while at the same time dreading it just as much. Exceptional work that could in any lesser hands have become stagnant and repetitive.


Name: Genie Chua (Signed) · Date: 11/09/03 - 04:48 pm · Chapter: CHP1
I can't remember if I ever send any feedback when I first read this a while ago, but I don't think I did. Anyway, this is one of those fic that I find myself *wanting* to re-read, but I just *can't* bring myself to go through it all again. All the emotional/physical hurt, pain that Tom went through... just way too painful. In a lesser hand, this could've easily turned into a gratuitous angst fest. This fic is anything but.


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